Sunday, December 11, 2011

College essay (Day 89)

I spent the whole day working on my college essay. I added things to it and then took them away. I mean I think that it doesn’t need that much more work, but I guess my mom thinks it does because she keeps trying to get me to keep editing it. But since I am terrible at editing anything I don’t really think it’s going to work. So she is really going to work on editing it and making my words sound better that what I could have organized.  It sounds better already. And then I have to write another essay (short answer for the common app) and upload the one I am working on now. Hopefully, I can make people see who I truly am and what I really like to do including riding horses and helping people.

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